Zoo rights
I am for animals to
be kept in zoos. They are part of our community.
The animals give the
children that come a chance to see and learn about lots of the animals that you
don’t see in New Zealand.
They should be kept
in zoos because the zoo keepers give them a big habitat, feed them & if
they are injured they have lots of medical assistance.
Also in zoos it is
safer for the baby animals to grow up and be big like their parents. In the
wild they could be hunted, killed or hurt by hunters, predators & worst of all, those despicable poachers.
Monty
Monty, this is a good piece of writing. You have structured the text well and each paragraph has a specific point.
ReplyDeleteI like the emotive language at the end of the writing as well.
Wish - to use more emotive language throughout the persuasive text & give more detail for each point.
Bevan